Fixing up a blog comment - Cybersmart

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Today in Cybersmart we were learning to fix up a blog comment to a postive thoughtful and helpful blog comment. We use a diagram made from Google Drawings to help us. My favourite part was fixing up the blog comment. To make this comment better I had to introduce the person who had written it and if we could find out what school they were from.

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Writing a positive thoughtful and helpful comment

Hello Today in Cybersmart we learnt to write a positive thoughtful and helpful comment. What i found tricky was thinking what to write as a positive thoughtful and helpful comment. I enjoyed exploring huraki blog. Please have a look. If you have any time please write a comment.